Reviews for Vertigo
Tarah chapter 25 . 5/28/2014
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This was so amazing! I actually respect how this turned out. Though it might not be what people wanted, it's realistic and it leaves a lot of development for the sequel. I'm also excited and nervous to see all the trouble they'll get into next time.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
toshica chapter 25 . 5/28/2014
It was just what they needed.
I thought that the ending was lovely.
justanordinarywriter chapter 25 . 5/28/2014
Omg! What is the title of the sequel, I'm desperate to know and even more to read it!
lostlamb chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
Definitely intriguing. Their journey will be something amazing. Great story.
Slm93 chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
Can't wait for the sequel!

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sinkingshorelines chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
And, it's over. Although my heart is screaming for Boone and Gemma to just get together, I knew that what went down had to happen. I wouldn't want the both of them to suddenly jump into a relationship, only for it to crumble down the very next second. But wow, no words can express how well you wrote Vertigo. It was all the right things in the right places. You have this ability to take a hold of your readers by the neck, playing with our emotions as if we're the ones being written. It goes without saying that I am dying to read the sequel! Until then!
Faylinn Notchwood chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
OMG. You're right. It's not the ending I was expecting. But you made it great to lead into the sequel. I love their relationship! I can't wait for the sequel!
augmentedDREAMS chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
That was such a worthy final chapter. I loved it. I feel so sad that Vertigo is over. But I can't wait for the sequel.

It feels like so long ago when I started reading this story. Gemma has changed so much. Even Boone. I still feel weird about them together, though. Seeing as he had been her mentor. But I wouldn't have it any other way. XD Even though I feel weird I like them together and I really hope they can be at the end.

Eagerly waiting for the sequel.
somewherecoldviasocal chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
Um, Macaroni?! lolololol. Sorry, that whole part was just too cute. Anyway, as I was reading, I wanted them to end up together. But then having Boone just up and leave like that (even when I believed his lie about the hospital visit) made me realize that they would just blow up if they got together. That Boone is not ready for that kind of commitment...yet. And I couldn't have him hurt Gem like that. That being said, I am in love with their new assignment and the fact that they are on the same page as friends/partners. Also, I liked that Gibson was pretty nonchalant about seeing Boone. I'm super excited for more. I cannot wait for the next chapter (of their story)! Off to read Sahara! :)
fivesevenfive chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
I loved this story, and I cannot put into words how phenomenal it was. I can't wait for the sequel!
shakespeare chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
That ending scene...so simple, yet so perfect. Talent yo.
GiGi chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
CARMEL MARCH I LOVE YOU.

Beautiful.

Bittersweet.

Realistic.

Unbelievably well done.

Get on that sequel! (:
bowl of strawberries chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
oh my lord, this was one of the most powerful chapters yet. i've said it before, but you know how to WRITE. like in terms of the style, but also how to communicate the smallest reactions/interactions between characters. i love this and how you went the realistic route, it promises so many exciting things for the sequel (which i will be on the lookout for!). your character development is insane and one of my fave things about your writing, it's like no one else's.

keep up the f*cking amazing work.
Guest chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
WOW, what a journey! Can't say I'm not disappointed that there wasn't any more closure or finality to their relationship, but that only means I'm excited to see what happens in the sequel. Please update soon!
deets1 chapter 25 . 5/27/2014
I really liked reading this story. Don't know how many months it's been, but it was worth it. I love Gemma and Boone, and Danny and Gibson and all of them. Can't believe they're not done though. Well I mean of corse they aren't the work is never done but this case! Geez.

I'm excited for the sequel and I really apprreciate it. Not many people write about relationship development and that's my favorite part. Well the getting together is great but it's all so stressful like geez. At least in the relationship each hardship comes with a bit more assurance and happiness. And it's so easy to see the non-Cinderella feeling. Because we never really no how the relationship proceeds after couples get together and when we haven't read them it's so hard to believe that it's lasting. Anyway. I appreciate this and thank you for deciding to embark on a sequel can't wait. Do you have a name for it yet?

Thanks,
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