Reviews for Vertigo
KB chapter 24 . 5/17/2014
Another amazing chapter! Anxiously awaiting the next! :)
Fiery Dancer chapter 24 . 5/13/2014
flanerie chapter 24 . 5/12/2014
YES, YES, YES! Finally! Aw, man, these two are the best! So much tension, so much obvious affection and they've finally admitted their feelings. I'm really, really not the sappy type but their confessions made me melt. So, so sweet.
imperfectlyokay chapter 24 . 5/11/2014
YAAAAAAAAAAAS I love this! Can't believe I'm only just reading this story, it's brilliant. I think either you know a lot about the military or you've done a lot of research because this is interesting and loaded with enough terminology to balance it between intelligent and understandable. There's only one chapter left, oh no :( But I'm thrilled about the sequel. xoxox
happysally chapter 12 . 5/10/2014
Still loving this story!
I really liked the bathos of the sex in this chapter, in comparison with Gemma and Boone's kiss earlier.
Can't wait to see where this goes!
happysally chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Loved the first chapter! Very believable and relatable characters even though its ovbiously not a situation I can relate to!
Cant wait to read the rest!
Kcoarra chapter 24 . 5/7/2014
Holy crap… I do not think I can express to how much I LOVE this story. I literally just spent a whole day reading it, I physically couldn't help myself. I simply have no words to describe to you how amazing this story is… I'm in awe. You have such a way with building up the plot and making things suspenseful and so interesting to read. I love the characters and the growth that you can obviously see happening. You should be so proud of this story! I almost cried when I realized that I was at the last chapter and I would have to wait for you to update before I would get to read more. However, it couldn't have been left at a better place. I honestly don't know how I will survive waiting for you to update, but I suppose I have no choice :(
Guest chapter 24 . 5/1/2014
This chapter was what I've been waiting for! Great chapter!
WritingKnightmare chapter 24 . 5/1/2014
Finally! All the tension that EVERYONE has noticed expect Gemma is finally resolved. I loved the back and forth banter about the date they had. That was quite funny. The end was made perfect by the little details, like the magnets falling to the floor. Clever and not something many people usually pay attention to. Well written.

I'm really happy to hear about a sequel. If this was an actual book, I'd pick it up instantly.

Anyway, can't wait for the final chapter!
A chapter 24 . 5/1/2014
WOW ! that's was explosive ! God,just reading that made me so hot ! Amazing ! These gwo have amazing chemistry! You wrote the scene so well ! All that sexual tension finally has a release.
Gem is always in such a hurry because of her job seeing her relax was a nice change !
Can't wait for thr next chapter ! :)
wyant14 chapter 24 . 4/30/2014
AHHHHH 3 3 3! I can't even! So much happiness I just can't. Oh my god I love this how did I not check earlier!
T chapter 24 . 4/29/2014
You had me fooled, ha! Honestly, I don't go to Dupont that frequently to make suggestions, but maybe for the sequel (woohoo, btw), I'll have some ideas, maybe?

Anywho, This chapter was a long-time coming! And I definitely appreciate the realism, not too over the top and your remarkable ability to bring each feeling and emotion B & G have to life...just stunning!

I truly look forward to the next chapter, sequel and whatever future works will come.

All the best!
MTveit chapter 24 . 4/29/2014
Thank you.
I don't know what else to say. Except for, maybe, that this chapter made my day, my week, my month. I can't help but feel like I'm somehow a part of this story, and that I know the characters. Never have I wanted a couple to come together more than Boone and Gemma. And now they are. Boone was just the sweetest thing in this chapter. I think I might have swooned for a moment during his 'confession', and I completely understand Gemma's mind totally crashing.
You are my favourite author. Can't wait for the next and final (for now) chapter. Are you planning a break before starting the sequel, or is it okay for me to look forward for 2.0 in the following months? :)
O O chapter 24 . 4/28/2014
Finally! God that was worth the wait! I LOVE THEM! And you're such a great writer! man go get published !
Charlette chapter 24 . 4/27/2014
absolutely loved this story! The action was so gripping and the tension - goodness the tension was so well written : can't help but feel a little sorry for Ben though... Please update soon! Can't wait for the last chapter and sequel!
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