Reviews for Vertigo
Elusive Lucidity chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Amazing as always.
I believe no one on FP can write better CIA stuff than you. I like this thing about your stories. You always make the female protagonist a tough person and you write all about the fancy world we wish we could be a part of. God, doesn't everyone just love getting lost in the world of secret missions? *_*

Also, I loved how action-packed this chapter was. You are truly remarkable, Carm. :D
Please update soon!

P.S: I am also waiting eagerly for The Deadly Flower update! :)
meghan2 chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
i love everything you write! wow.
Eve in the garden chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Great first chapter! You have set an awesome pace with the action and it's great that we get an insight into her personal life too. Am looking forward to next chapter!
cruella chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
CARMEL MARCH HAS A NEW STORY! i am so psyched. this first chapter was stunning, really. i love gemma, boone, and even ben. i've never read anything like this. it is SO well-written. update now!
thenifoundfivedollars chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
YESS!

I saw the Bourne Legacy last night have been in the mood for something like this ever since! (okay, who am I kidding, I’m ALWAYS in the mood for something like this) Of course, it’s you writing which means it’ll not only be a pleasant, well written story it’s sure to have the a-mazing and thought out plot to back it up. I’m pretty positive this is going to be a favorite of mine. :)

Gemma is strong, intelligent and independent but vulnerable enough to be relatable. I love that she’s an agent herself, it’ refreshing. Plus it’s only the first chapter and it is clear that she’s likable. So, once again, great job!

Thomas Boone is an interesting character. He and Gemma seem to have a great relationship. From his teasing her when she entered the safe house to his comforting, albeit in an adorable, manly way, and on the plane it’s clear that he cares about her.

And poor Ben! I can only imagine how difficult it would be to be in his situation. Not only does he not know what his girlfriend does for a living, her coming home injured and in tears probably does terrible things with his imagination. I can’t wait to see where you take this.

Wonderful story, and I’m more than a little excited to read more! Thanks for sharing you obvious knowledge of the CIA with us, and peppering in all the romance and drama and action to keep readers like me on their toes!
SoulSam chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
This story is already amazing and so damn well-written (as usual). Super intrigued and very excited to read more :)
Angela Donahue chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Ok- this is the second time I have started one of your books and I'll give a review because you are a damn good writer ! But please tell me how to get the rest of the story! Yes you caught my attention and I want to know what happens next! The saspense of waiting to find out might get to me. This is very good! It's almost like I'm her with the bruises on my neck! I want to Finnish this story. ;) thumbs up - this is a good one too. Don't stop writing . If someone starts this book they won't want to put it down.
x-wonderstruck chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
i'm already hooked! you've managed to introduce the characters so well - thomas seems like a sweetheart! and gemma is a really interesting character to read about. i can't wait to see where this story goes! update soon :)
Fiery Dancer chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I love it! This is looking to be a great new story :) il be waiting for the next chapter!
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I really liked this. I like her vulnerbility and contrasting strength. This is definitely a story to look forward to. Can't wait for the next installment. Good writing.
Bailey chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Wow, I've never read anything like this. I am so intrigued and I already love the characters. I honestly can't wait for more!
bowl of strawberries chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
holy crap. i didn't know you were working on something else. i already LOVE THIS SO MUCH. gemma is so strong, but i like that she's not unrealistically strong. boone is my new crush. and ben, well, i kinda like him, too. it's perfect. update soon!
Writing In Ink Forever chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Ooo, this was AWESOME! I absolutely LOVED it, and can't wait to see more of Gemma in the future!

-Enchantress.
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