Reviews for alive
pulses can drive from here chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
i love this little piece. i really like the words "palm" and "collarbone," how they're used here, and the line about the "tiny web of skin" - i just love the way it's worded. ooh, i get chills.
electrical moon chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Beautiful poem!
True Talker chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Again, SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL. THANK YOU for sharing this.
Stardust Kid chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Amazing, this poem has such power in it. Very concise, yet seems to say all that needs to be said. Great job :)
Archia chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Aww that's really sweet. I like how much of the love comes through just by describing the small things like the skin. Really nice.