Reviews for Lies
a123123123 chapter 1 . 11/6/2016
I hope you and your entire family die a very slow and painful death of cancer. You are nothing but a worthless cocksucking piece of shit, a spawn of a transvestite whore, you worthless fuck. Delete my account you fucking piece of shit or go back to sucking your father's cock while your mother shits onto your face.

I hope you and your entire family die a very slow and painful death of cancer. You are nothing but a worthless cocksucking piece of shit, a spawn of a transvestite whore, you worthless fuck. Delete my account you fucking piece of shit or go back to sucking your father's cock while your mother shits onto your face.
sacredflame778 chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I like how the first two lines have not one but two rhyming words ("thought" and "ought" as well as "path" and "wrath"). The rest of the poem does not lose its cadence, which I like. I noticed that "him" is capitalized. Are you talking about God? An abusive boyfriend? It's interesting to think about.