Reviews for Lies
sacredflame778 chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I like how the first two lines have not one but two rhyming words ("thought" and "ought" as well as "path" and "wrath"). The rest of the poem does not lose its cadence, which I like. I noticed that "him" is capitalized. Are you talking about God? An abusive boyfriend? It's interesting to think about.