Reviews for A Hand On My Shoulder
CJRobley chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Best line ever: "I opened up Office, like I always do when I'm feeling bad..."
I laughed, and I don't normally, but that line seemed hilarious for some reason. Good story!
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Omg this gave me goosebumps :O

Although to be sincere it would've been better if it had ended when it said "behin you" or something. Just my opinion, don't take it too seriously haha
Morbid Quill chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
This was quite a unique piece. It was suspenseful and captivating, and you seem to be in control of your grammar. I would prefer a bit more description of the surroundings. What was the weather like? Was it raining? Was it windy? Were the skies eerily calm? All in all, I did enjoy this story. But the curse words did give this a bit of a bitter aftertaste, and in my opinion, this little tale would have been better off without them. I applaud you, however, and I am adding this to favorites.

...Pretty soon I am going to compose my own submission to FictionPress, but for now I am surfing the website to see what others have written...

Kudos to you,

-Morbid Quill