|Reviews for A Hand On My Shoulder|
| CJRobley chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Best line ever: "I opened up Office, like I always do when I'm feeling bad..."
I laughed, and I don't normally, but that line seemed hilarious for some reason. Good story!
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Omg this gave me goosebumps :O
Although to be sincere it would've been better if it had ended when it said "behin you" or something. Just my opinion, don't take it too seriously haha
| Nonexistent Phantom chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
This was quite a unique piece. It was suspenseful and captivating, and you seem to be in control of your grammar. I would prefer a bit more description of the surroundings. What was the weather like? Was it raining? Was it windy? Were the skies eerily calm? All in all, I did enjoy this story. But the curse words did give this a bit of a bitter aftertaste, and in my opinion, this little tale would have been better off without them. I applaud you, however, and I am adding this to favorites.
...Pretty soon I am going to compose my own submission to FictionPress, but for now I am surfing the website to see what others have written...
Kudos to you,