Reviews for Face Up
True Talker chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
This made me think in more than one way. If it helps I would LOVE TO FACE SOMEONE IN PERSON I REALLY WOULD. Either way THANK YOU for sharing this.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
I really liked this and the ending was really unexpected but very clever. You lead us to believe (or maybe it's just how I read it) that the speaker is talking to the person they love and what they were trying to get out were their feelings, when actually they were merely rehearsing that.

I liked the structure and it had very nice flow and it was one of those poems that is easily relatable too. I think this is a great piece of poetry. The first stanza where the speaker is struggling to get the words out really makes me feel sorry for them. And as for the imagery well that too worked very well in this piece.

Great piece and I'm glad I had the chance to read it :)