|Reviews for When In Vegas|
| rosieroo chapter 5 . 9/17/2013
YAY I'VE FINALLY CAUGHT UP now you need to keep updating. Everything. EVERYTHING!
Loooove it, of course, and I can't wait to read more about Dawid and Euan. I really liked how much Dawid's dads had a proper backstory, it makes me want to read about them more!
| mia aurora chapter 4 . 1/3/2013
stupid copycat.I'll sign up right you though and I do hope that this plagiarized thingy will not change your mind in updating your stories
| Peachy-09 chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
I think the touch of Dawid being Polish is what sets this story aside but then adding in the subtle way you add the Polish in without having to write an awkward italic translation! Beautiful.
I'm sorry that you're struggling with your NaNoWriMo but I'm glad it's inspiring updates!
| rosieroo chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
Omg helen I love your slash novels. I like how this is fairly fast-moving, I think it suits it really well. Do you know polish? I don't think I've ever heard someone speak to polish before! I like how you integrated the translation into the story without it seeming stilted or forced, I think you did well there! Anyway, hope you continue this with your lovely nano :)
| Sara chapter 3 . 11/21/2012
I actually like this chapter the best so far. It's still quick paced but slowed us down to show the characters a little. Lovely Q&A session between the boys!
| Sara chapter 2 . 11/15/2012
I think the fast pace is right for the setting you've created. That weekend affair... Oh I can't wait for more!
| Peachy-09 chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
I'm glad you did tell us how to say that name! I was thinking you had spelt it wrong! Haha!
Excellent chapter. And I must say, I'm enjoying the fast pace. Seriously - when has a bar romance ever been slow?
| Guest01 chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
I think your habit of writing in third person took over in chapter two, you forgot to write in first! However, it's an easy mistake and it doesn't matter because this chapter is still amazing. I think the fast pace really works with the story plot you're trying to build.
| Peachy-09 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Excellent new story, and a fantastic start. I adore the way you've started writing in first person. It's almost as if we can hear your voice through that of the main character. It's excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Mr. Ree chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Aw yay it's lovely to see your story up here! I'm super excited to see what you've got in store, Helen :)
And I love the quote in the beginning
| ThePointGirl chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Well, you need to continue this. Like, really really soon :)
It's terribly cute, and the character voices are so clear I can hear them as I read.
Well done my love.
It's slash too which is always a positive streak with me ;)
| Rae Kitano chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Great start :)
| fellintothemoon chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
THIS IS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ EVER IN THE HISTORY OF THE WORLD. Ahem. My favorite character is Melissa... hmmm I wonder why *le smirk*. The fact that you wrote this beautious slash story just for me, means the world to me. I love you soooo much. I could kiss you right now! *mwah mwah mwah* kisses.
Beautifully written, as always. I love your voice so much! Uhg I'm so jealous. LOVE YOU.
| rosieroo chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Am I the first reviewer? HECK YESSS I THINK I AM!
Anyway, ahem, onto the story. Helen, this looks sooo promising! I am actually so excited. I love when you write slash! And this is just a great first chapter, especially since we met that totally hot stranger ;) I CAN'T WAIT FOR IT TO GET M-RATED (pressure's on).