Reviews for His Eyes Fixated on the Door
Rainel Krey chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Very descriptive and led me where I did not expect to go. Looking though his eyes makes one really feel for him and want to understand him. It somehow leaves you with an oddly nice feeling.
Deserthawk chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Interesting. Alcoholic's Anonymous, right? This went in a totally different direction than I thought it would, which is great. I thought at first maybe he was dead, was going to face his reckoning or something. Like how you take a sort of fantastical scenario and make it realistic in the end after all.
Intense view into this guy's mind, his life really. It's cool how you do that in so few words. Nice description and imagery as well.
Keep it up!