First, HOLY HERA PLEASE COMPLETE THIS STORY.
This is by far one of the best stories I have read in this website. Its so well written. The story flows beautifully. It brings the characters and their emotions to brilliantly written and the plot is superb.
Second, I wanted to see Arthur react to seeing Danny at the hospital. For that...you gotta update. But I get the feeling that its been too long since you updated.
I hope you are still writing and I pray that you update this wonderful tale sometime.
Finally
I want to express my anger over the fact that RIDICULOUS TEENAGE DRAMA STORIES WITH BAD QUALITY THREESOMES HAVE MORE REVIEWS. Why. This story should have been a hit. It saddens me that so many people dont know what they are missing.

You, sir, are a wonderful human being. Or Madam. Idk what gender you are. ANYHOO.
KEEP WRITING FOREVER.
LOTS OF LOVE TO DANNY MARSH ARTY HAMMY SOPHIE OLLY JANNY EVERYONE! I LOVE ALL YOUR CHARACTERS.
BYE.

Oh thank god for microchips.
That sick dhskpifkhflgl

OH GOD OH GOD OH FUCK ATGGOPDKHWLWPEO
WHAAAAAAAT

That bitch.
I wouldnt be surprised if she was behind Danny's parents' death.

Hamilton seems cool too.
You have really strong characters in this story.

So Mr Creepy walked in. Saw them while they were sleeping. Left.
Okay.
I am not scared.
Who said that?
WHO SAID THAT

STAY AWAY FROM DANIEL YOU HEAR ME?
*SHAKES FIST AT THE BADDIES*
STAAAAAYY AWAAAAAAY
*PICKS UP THE CHAINSAW*

I KNEW HE WOULD FREAK OUT.

Oh this is so nice ;_;
Danny you rock!

Yes Samuel L Jackson will be the only Nick Fury xD
The TV show Hannibal is pretty cool too tho. Nothing on Hopkins, but still pretty cool. XD

...so one moment I am super happy about Danny and Marshal and the next I am cringing in fear.

The ending was so disturbing.
The kind of power that evil deeds have.

Oh my god.
You just put in a recipe for Tofu.
This is a new level of awesome ;_;

Awwww Danny is so cute xD
I dont like creepy pervs following sexy FBI agents around.
Nooooooo

LEGO METROPOLIS! YAY!
Adam seems creepy. Is he the criminal too?
Hmmm xD