Reviews for Twisted
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I love the structure of this piece as the 'you' 'me 'you' 'me' thing made me think of a person and their shadow which was really cool even though I doubt its what u intended and can't tell who the speakers really are lol. I also liked your use of the word yet in the penultimate line because it made me pause and think, and kind of adds an edgy sarcastic tone to the poem for me which I think is great. Great writing :) chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
This is super good. Nice one. :)
Mayu Sun chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
I like the rhyming scheme. Though I must be twisted...
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
That gave me a good perspective, nice job! I like how you put the twisted man's thoughts as opposites to the sane man's thoughts.