Reviews for Ava Dear
UnpredictableMe chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Sweet, hope your Ava knows what a great mother she has! :D cheers!
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
This is a very beautiful poem! The rhyming scheme just added more color, and impacted greater effect. I must say, I loved the lines
"Dear Ava dear,
Stay like this forever
Live life and
Never say never
Love and trust
Be smart and clever
Remember me
I'll love you forever."

beautiful! Keep it up :D
theshadow603 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Excellent! It certainly illustrates the beautiful innocence and nativity of youth. The world would be so much less cynical if we all didn't grow up ae
Ditztgirly22 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I miss Ava. This is really sweet and it's message is so true. I wish all the sweet and innocent ones in the world could stay just like that.
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
aww this is soo sweet, i love it! I love explaining life like a chapter book, and it captures the innocence of youth beautifully, befire heartaches and retchid boys (lol) and stress, when there is only fairies and princesses and ponys and dancing on daddys feet and your sister is older and amazing, this captures all of that and i love it!
violetfireflies chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Ahhh that was so good! I love this poem. :) You are so amazing at poetry I don't even know what to say. haha