Reviews for Rules
Foxdapple101 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
This seems like quite a good idea for a story to me! There are a couple grammatical errors, and the flow isn't the best, but it's quite good and I can't wait to see how the girl continues her story.

I really love the way this is written. Not in first person, but almost like it could be. "Ah, yes, reality." That sentence, although short, holds quite a bit within it. From that, I can tell that the author completely understands what s/he is talking about, which is going to be one of the strong points in this.

I can't wait to read more!