Reviews for Body
auntcal1 chapter 11 . 7/26/2013
I very much enjoyed chapter 11. All of the different powers are exciting. And throw in some romance. Very nice.
auntcal chapter 9 . 4/21/2013
Awesome fight scene with the Nature Giant. Very discriptiv
e and imaginative. You know who's up for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
AFireInside55 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Needs a lot of editing done (perhaps grab a Beta?) but the story seems interesting. Faved!

-AFI55
auntcal chapter 6 . 10/13/2012
Chapter 6 needs some spell check. That aside the story is heating up. Guess who I am waiting on now. Chapter 7 please.
auntcal chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Awesome concept of a story and great collaboration. The only criticism is that there are some words that are spelled correctly, but are not the correct word for that sentence. Therefore, spell check won't find the errors. Otherwise, I enjoyed the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.