|Reviews for We Are The Death|
| Historicalbookworm chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
I liked the actual story, I didnt like the Dutch/German, which made it really confusing.
| Jon Berkley chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Well, I liek the story, but there are some things I want to point out.
First, the name of your main character. The name Klaus is actually a German name, If you want a real Dutch name, you should do something like: Klaas, Piet, Wim, Arie etc.
But the last name is a bit strange, because Kanker is the dutch word for Cancer, so his name is a bit strange.
Second: The Dutch translations are a bit weird, a lot of times expressions being translated literally, leading to some humorous exoressions and quite a lot of grammatical errors. If you want, I could help translate the Dutch dialogue in English for you. (I'm Dutch, myself)
Third: Hitler was actually worried about The Netherlands, because he was afraid that the English would try to land in The Netherlands and so attack hitler in Germany, so he did attack us before France and Birtian.
The concept of the idea is great though and I hope that you will continue it soon.