Reviews for Help me!
DormDad chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
First of all you have this in the wrong category- it should be in poetry, not fiction. You have several spelling errors Line 3-themselves (not them selves) Line 4 rthat should be spelled "that"; Line 6 "Completely, normal, casually" This is incorrect as far as grammar is concerned and you changed your format that you were using up to that point. If this is free verse then it makes a little more sense. The grammar though in Line 6 has problems. Line 17 has a spelling error- "ore" instead of "more". Good effort though. Write On!