Reviews for Broken
sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Such a subject not many contemplate, but when you break something, it will never be the same.

Relationships, objects, it doesn't matter, really. This is so true for pretty much anything, one that I, sadly, know exactly of.

This poem is so blunt with the matter, yet it's encompassed in beautiful metaphoric words; well done, this was great.

Happy writing, friend
-sapphire
Oak Leaf Ninja chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I can definetly relate.
toto23 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
i just love your poems
Starry-eyed Starfish chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
You touch on things that people normal sweep past and you make them beautiful :3
This reminded me of a broken doll that has been thrown aside and abandoned... :'(
My favourite phrases: "Uncontained sea" and "bleed out" - they were strange but completely correct ways of describing those two things :)
I feel kind of bad though because I always break things :'(
GoldenMockingjay chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I really like this. I enjoy reading about these topics, as there is so much to expand on, and your version of telling this was great:0
Delilah Brightman chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Such a great metaphor. I really enjoy your poems, you have such great talent!