Reviews for Cherry Pie and Menthol Cigarettes
saladbowl91 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
So beautifully written, it flows so well.
Tianxia chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Loved it. The descriptions were fresh and varied. When more specific physical descriptions came in (her copper hair, long, white legs) it felt like I was following a trail of gems. Also, you described her so deeply, it made me wonder about the man. Why would the man care about her deeply? It could be that, used to power, he wants everything, including her emotional love. It could be that, jaded by the corporate world, he's looking for something 'real.' Maybe he was a wife and kids simply because he is expected to; they love him because it is their place and they are expected to. Thus he's looking for something unexpected from someone who isn't expectant.
The only thing confusing was the time clues about when they woke up. The section begins, "In the mornings," and goes on to describe what it was like waking up in the morning with him. Later on she asks him to stay the night and both act like it's unusual.
Overall, loved it. 3