|Reviews for Transcend (Season One)|
| LaStoria chapter 15 . 9/3/2013
Oh it ain't gonna be pretty! I have a feeling Courtney's going to be discovered or they will be taken as hostages! I'm just throwing random ideas out there. Great chapter!
| LaStoria chapter 14 . 9/2/2013
Pour Courtney! I feel so bad for her... One again, great chapter!
| LaStoria chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
I wonder what Meredith is up to... Great chapter! I have a feeling Meredith knew that that creature was going to show up. She had something to do with it...Hmm...
| LaStoria chapter 12 . 9/2/2013
That last part with the creature surprised me! Great chapter!
| LaStoria chapter 11 . 9/2/2013
I'm still trying to figure out who Lukas is going to go for: Luna or Courtney... This was an entertaining chapter! The Ikusa matches remind me of the Hunger Games...
| LaStoria chapter 10 . 9/2/2013
I wonder what happened to Lukas?
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 29 . 8/29/2013
Good luck with college! I really do hope that you manage up continue updating regularly. Just have graduated, I know that you will have time management issues and the story will be taking the back seat, especially around midterms/finals/projects and that you'll be even more stressed with work thrown into that mix, but I appreciate that you will try to update. Work hard and don't make us wait too long.
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 28 . 8/29/2013
This has been a great journey that you've taken us on, Benehime! Thanks for sharing this story and letting us become part of the adventure. Onward to Despair!
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 27 . 8/29/2013
I fail to see why they would have done the thing at the end, but I'm sure that organization had some reason. I hope Luna gets that scholarship then.
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 26 . 8/29/2013
What is Ms. Elresin planning? Will Meg recover in time to aid her team? Will the Luna's gamble pay off? What's up with these new rules? Most importantly, will they win the match? Read the next chapter to find out!
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 25 . 8/29/2013
The Emperor's speech makes it sound like the Transhumans are fundamentally different from the regular Humans in their brains and thought patterns. The society that they will form will inevitably end up with violence committed by the people on each other. Everything is like that from humans and other mammals down to fish and reptiles and even smaller microbes. Silly Transhumans...
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 24 . 8/29/2013
I'm glad Lukas still has a support even after everything last chapter. I'm still amazed by his mom.
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 23 . 8/29/2013
NOOOOOOOO! Not Ben. Not Ben...NO!
Lukas! You must avenge Ben for me. Forget Courtney; Avenge Ben!
When you had introduced the new characters I initially thought that either the older characters would just not be written about for a very long time and that maybe one or two would die, including Vanessa. I never, NEVER thought you'd just kill everyone off like this.
I don't think I can read on. I have to mourn Ben. I hope there's another character like him later...
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 22 . 8/29/2013
It's terrible that Courtney's entire family was cut down like this. I don't feel bad for her though because she's an IDIOT! If she managed to live long enough to be able to give such a long speech about love and happiness she should have been able to say something about Vanessa. I'm glad that you had Lukas be smart enough to be able to figure it out himself, but I would have made her die before finishing any sort of conversation just so it would be sadder and more dramatic. That's just a personal writing choice though. I hope he kills Vanessa after he gets her to talk. If he's to enraged to talk I at least hope that the fight is epic.
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 21 . 8/28/2013
Courtney is such an idiot! Why did she tell Vanessa? She's clearly not good at thinking, so why did she have to start trying now?
I'm surprised that the group didn't go to see the match. I'd want to be there to see what was happening if I was his friend, more so if I was the insecure girlfriend. Instead she's out shopping with the enemy.
I hope Kane beats Luna so that Lukas can come in and win the match dramatically. Or maybe he can come in and save Luna just as she's about to lose.