|Reviews for Run The Clone Chronicles|
| Just helping chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
I do like the idea of this story, but I want to point out to you the mistake of putting past tense in occasionally where there should be present tense. Also, keep in mind that when writing something that you want to capture people's attention with and draw them in that you don't want to begin with a lengthy explanation but rather start with a hook and try to begin wih some action or dialogue. Maybe even just thoughts.