|Reviews for Make me PRETTY|
| Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This was very interestingly put together. I was intrigued by the summary of being put together by different articles and you made it work very, very well! People really do go to extreme lengths to feel beautiful and you captured the pain perfectly. Why can't we all just accept ourselves for how we are? Aging is beautiful. Every wrinkle, every line is stunning. It makes us more unique and special. We need to see it this way. Great write! I loved it.
| True Talker chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
This makes me think of the history behind colour and I believe that it was a rare colour blue. Women would put this on their eye lids and they had died as the poison had entered their blood stream. They had created the colour by melting things together. Talk about dying for beauty. This poem also reminds me of the Umbrella Corporation.