Reviews for The Mountain
AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I like the mystery behind this one. Was John a ghost? A spirit lingering to look after his friend Hank-or perhaps he was dead all along and Hank, too blinded by grief, let him live on in his mind as a way to survive? It's not really clear - but I like that. You can make up your own mind.

Great twist!
Deserthawk chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Liked that twist at the end. It's interesting; somehow not being buried all the way makes it all that more terrifying.
Some of the jumps were kind of sudden for me. But it also gave an effect of losing track of time, which was nice.
Blunt and bleak overall. You certainly don't sugarcoat things. Good read.