|Reviews for Bitter Heart|
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Why is love never ever simple? I guess we'll never know. But I'm a hopeless but also realistic romantic (if that is even possible) and I just feel that sometimes love like this sucks because you love the wrong guy but you can't see it. Love makes you blind sometimes.
Anyway I'm rambling! What I wanted to say was that this poem is again relatable to me and the emotion is laced it there very well. The speaker's sad, hopelessly in love but honest nonetheless, desperate because they're pleading and I feel a little bit of anger in there as well because the last line on its own would be considered an imperative (order) because it's like the speaker is ordering them to tell the truth. Anyway that's just my opinion.
It's a great piece, as always. I'm running out of words to describe how great it is :)
| True Talker chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This makes me think. Why? Because I am not lying about things. I LOVE this part; "You already know I'll Never, ever, leave you." THANK YOU for that. SERIOUSLY THANK YOU.