Reviews for Life
Ty Dee chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Kind of a depressing outlook on the subject, but altogether a very well written piece of poetry. It flows perfectly, both when read and spoken aloud (I find poetry sounds better when spoken), and the variety of true and slant rhymes adds depth to the subject and consequently the poem. The only lines of this poem I did not enjoy were the third- and second-to-last lines, simply because the words "disappear" and "appear" do not match plurality. Were this my poem, I would simply change "disappear" to "disappears," same with appear. Take my suggestion how you will, just know that I really enjoyed the time I spent reading this poem.