|Reviews for Girls Dead Monster|
| HeroSpirit chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Magical girls, zombies, and battle instraments. I suggest you get rid of one of these elements, as this story will be hard to write while making sense. As far as the writing goes, there's little to no description, the characters are cardboard, and the story lacks sense. You have a long road ahead of you, my friend, but if this is important enough to you I encourage you to keep going.