Reviews for Dark Innocence
scandalosity chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
After reading your story, i may get into more of the thriller-horror genre, which i normally just look right past when reading. I loved your detail and the imagery depicted in your words, i could picture the gruesome scene in my mind and it was fantastically creepy! Besides a few typo's, it was awesome(:
Tater Clause chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Excellent phrasing and imagery, for instance "splatters of life." The only thing I can say is to avoid repetitive words like "fell." Try cascading or tumbled. Other than that, great story. Short and spooky, just as intended.
Morbid Quill chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
This was dark and creepy and morbidly descriptive. I was absolutely enthralled with it. You obviously have a knack for writing horror scenes, and I hope to see more from you soon. This had a nice suspenseful touch to it. Good luck with your writing adventures!

From one writer to another,

-Morbid Quill