|Reviews for Sure of This|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I am sure that love is all I've ever asked of you
and that you deny me only this,
while you bestow your love like tokens
you have too much of,
upon the ones who followed after me.
- very moving
| nimue.brown chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I like the way you're using the repeated phrase to create a kind of structure here, almost has a mantra quality to it.