|Reviews for Nightmare Of The Dead|
| Jozsa Vida chapter 2 . 10/31/2012
i really liked the story.. next chapter please :D
| jinrebust chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
it's not the best but it's truly good overall I liked reading it and I think this will be a good one in my own opinon keep it up
| Lolitroy chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
Good chapter. I lolled when Yuichi gave Ritsu a buncha keys to open the door and Ritsu went like "Which one?"
It took a while for me to discover that Yuichi was a girl hehe.
I have just one petition, which is, well, could you separate dialogue into separate paragraphs? I get what you're trying to do, but the site format makes it look all distracting. Keep updating please :D
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Mmmm I've always liked zombie stories haha. Did you get an inspiration from HOTD or something? I'm just curious.
Your concept is good (hell, what zombie story doesn't?) but there is something that kinda confuses me. And I mean verb tenses. Sometimes you make a past tense, sometimes present. And I just dunno. But anyway, no story is perfect, you know.
I liked this one. I hope you don't ditch it like so many other good stories on FP. You got a loyal reader haha :D
P.S. Hell yeah bats are a classis in zombie stories :D