Reviews for Red Riding Wolf
Avery Sweet chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
That was AWSOME!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Belltor? Good name. I enjoy that. Grammar things, a little hard to read, but it was pretty original and awesome and such.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
I thought the ending was a little rushed, there were a lot of grammar problems but other than that it was pretty good. I enjoyed the start and such.
Princess Asaria chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
It's a good story! :) I just get confused sometimes...
Jokermask18 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
x-Keeper of the Forbidden-x chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Great story! I love the way you added a whole different twist at the end, and the added background on Red was very nice.

When you're writing, try not to make your sentences drag out too long. Most of your sentences can be broken up into two or three sentences, and you could use a few more commas here and their as well. [Though overusing them could prove just as much a problem ;) ]
Sushi-Sisters chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
A nice twist! I really like how you gave Red a lot more personality. It gives a deeper look into the commen fairytale. C: