|Reviews for Waffle No More|
| susumiya08 chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
wow! they can fight! at first I was soo mad at the phone thing, and then...the ocean... well fuck, if you got time for facebook, why not send her pm from there, unless the pictures were always from other people, whatever. I'm happy they're together and waffles are always the answer lol
| rozalicious678 chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
Loved this one too! :)
| Julietish chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Hey there! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo to let you know your story has been added to the site. Here's your review:
Waffle No More is the delightful one-shot follow up to "Leggo my Eggo". I, like the author, suggest you read the original before Waffle No More as it really helps to establish the relationship between Max and Wendy!
Wendy is the kind of character who walks the delicate balance between sarcasm and true emotion. It's difficult to craft dialogue where sarcasm also carries the weight of genuine emotion, but Lenni is a master at this. I found Wendy as endearing as Max clearly did. Max is the kind of guy who will probably look back on his high school self one day and wonder why he behaved the way he did sometimes. He's a good guy at heart, but cursed with the unfortunate high school experience of being too attractive and popular to clearly know how to navigate social interaction at times. They are a great balance for each other as Max allows Wendy to come out from behind her harsh sarcasm and Wendy keeps Max a little more grounded than he would be without her. They have a sweet, easy chemistry that makes reading their back and forth incredibly fun.
As with most one shots, Waffle No More is a pleasant snap shot of one event in the complex realm of human experience. Still, there was just enough for me to fall so hopefully in love with Wendy in Max that I'm crossing my fingers that this two shot might become a trilogy. Lenni pens a great one-shot and you definitely won't regret checking this one out.
| Lexi Eraka chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
They have absolutely nothing in common. They're two very different people and an odd couple to say the least. But what they do have is love for each other and let's not forget. Love for waffles.
Wait... Am I right in assuming Max has a love for waffles just as Wendy does? Lol oh well. I enjoyed reading this :)
| tizzledubs chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
| Canada 1 chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Both this and Leggo were really cute. Thanks for sharing.
| Princess Wanderer chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I still want more about how they ended up together, even though I read both one-shots
| my princess ending chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I felt so much pain in my chest when they broke up because Wendy & Max are one of my favorite couples. And I just wasn't used to them fighting or anything because in "Leggo My Ego", it was all fluff and love and none of this hurting. Oh My Gosh. That was too much for me.
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| lollipop addict chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Naww! So cute I want to eat this story!
| TheBatismyMan chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Aw, god. Your dynamic duo is just awesome. You built them awesomely. GOOD WORK!
| beverlyamethyst16 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Oooh I ABSOLUTELY LOVED this :D It was just amazing haha
| Alltoowell chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Haha, I definitely love how waffles are still a big part of this. I felt this oneshot was better because it focused on more of their relationship. I can see how much they really like each other and why. Awesome sequel!
| A-new-colour chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This was so good! it's actually kind of better than the first one :)
| Restricted.Object chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
These two amuse me. Seriosuly. They're so freakin' cute! This story make me fangirl-squee. That doesn't happen often. I applaud you.
| larafrancesca chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Loved them both :) Well done!