Reviews for Kailin's Keeper |
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R. Ficst chapter 13 . 5/15/2013 eek! This is absolutely fantastic. Love your writing, love the plot and setting, love the characters so much! Can't wait for more updates! |
R. Ficst chapter 12 . 5/15/2013 Noooooooooo! and I can see there are only 13 chapters at the moment, so I have this horrible feeling that I am soon going to be left waiting in absolute agony! |
nanamitakahashi chapter 13 . 4/13/2013 I WANT TO CRY! HUHUUHU... I REALLY LIKE THIS BUT I HAVE TO GIVE THIS UP... I REALLY DONT LIKE IT WHEN A TOP BOTTOMS FOR ANYONE... WHY DID HE ANYWAY? HE COULD JUST DO IT HIS ON WAY... BESIDES I THOUGHT HE IS A FRIEND WITH THE CROWN PRINCE.. ISN'T THAT THE BEST WAY TO GO UP? A CROWN PRINCE WILL HELP YOU MORE THAN RANK OFFICIAL COULD... I'M SO SAD AND I WANT TO CRY AND AND HEART HURTS ALL AT THE SAME TIME... IT JUST DOESN'T MAKE SENSE... HUHUUHU |
Anonymous chapter 13 . 4/7/2013 Love this story. Your characters are so intriguing! I hope you can update soon! :) |
Anon chapter 13 . 3/13/2013 I love your writing, your doing great! Please update soon! |
DawnSister chapter 13 . 2/10/2013 The intrigue grows, building to a crescendo and within that there is Kailin and Lukin. Whilst it seems the story revolves around them there is such depth to this universe you've created that between the lines and with a few sentences well placed your reader knows that what is happening between your two main characters is simply a part of the bigger story. You are very clever. DS |
starryeyedd chapter 13 . 2/9/2013 ahhh so glad you updated! i might have suggested this before, or maybe somebody else has, or maybe you thought of it, but if you have time/are interested, i would definitely read a spin off of zaks & graven's relationship! anyway great chapter, love this fic. please update again soon :) |
Iamausername chapter 13 . 2/9/2013 So excited to see this updated! I was preparing myself for some gut-punch feels this chapter because of how you left chapter 12, but I must say I like this version better ;) That last part sounds a bit foreboding though. Can't wait to see what's in store for Lukin and Kailin! |
DarksideOfTheMoon342 chapter 12 . 2/2/2013 How long can they go back and forth like this? |
okami2013 chapter 12 . 1/18/2013 I am completely and utterly blown away by how amazing this story is. It is so well written and tantalizing that I managed to read it up to chapter 12 in one sitting. The eloquence in your writing is spot on and your character development is going smoothly. How long do you plan on making this little gem? P.s. I'm so excited for the next chapter, I might just read it again (a few more times). |
Da Jeong chapter 12 . 1/11/2013 It makes me sad that Lukin has made this decision. ㅠㅠ |
starryeyedd chapter 12 . 1/11/2013 ): thank you for updating. the end of this chapter was so sad, my heart is breakinggg. i hope you have time to update again soon! |
Elysian913 chapter 12 . 1/11/2013 Wow! This chapter was awesome! I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
rEdRoSeSiNaUgUst chapter 12 . 1/11/2013 They are both idiots. Kailin better run like a bullet after him. |
GrangerDanger333 chapter 12 . 1/11/2013 Oh my gosh what?! No! I can't believe Kailin just went to sleep and decided to leave the whole 'telling Lukin how I really feel about him and all this bond stuff' thing until later. And now Lukin's going to leeeave him! Oh dear :( But I'm sure it'll all turn out right :D I re-read the last chapter as well and I hope you are going to give us some more about Zaks and Graven.. They are a very interesting couple... I like them :) |