This guy is despicable. I can't stand him; I can't believe he goes on a date with his ex-fiancee and momentarily forgets about his wife completely! Him missing her doesn't qualify as a good excuse. I love your way of writing though.

The main guy is so annoying. He left his best friend during their wedding for another girl, marries the girl, and then later goes on a date with his best friend when he sees her again, leaving his wife without any explanation; apparently, he just wanted to have fun with his ex-fiancee behind his wife's back before being scolded by her. Then, he went travelling with his best friend, without any regard towards his wife's feelings. When she informed him that she was going to have a baby, he didn't do anything. His best friend was dying, so I understand why he did not leave, but he could have called or emailed his wife back. It's his baby.

The writing is great though, even if the main character was not likeable in the least. The grammar is good, and there were no spelling mistakes.

Oh god, I am reading this at Starbucks, and they have as background music that love of my life song by queen and I am tearing up. God, you are a great author. Really. Keep it up, this story is absolutely amazing, even though at first I though this guy is kind of a dickhead I sort of like him now, anyway, awesome story! :D