Reviews for Shawn's Voice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story completely destroyed me. I was already crying in the first chapter. This is one of the sweetest things I've ever read! I love the characters and how protective Ryan is of Shawn, and how much they've cared about each other almost their entire lives. The line about how Ryan has been Shawn's everything was perfect. While there were some mistakes, I thought it was really well done and you did an amazing job of what I consider to be one of the most important things about writing - making your readers feel a variety of emotions. This story is going to stick with me for a long time! |
![]() ![]() I love them! This is an awesome cute story! My fav character is Ryan, I just loveeee him! I have a classmate named Ryan so at first it was a bit strange for me, but I got used to it quickly |
![]() ![]() Speaking his name was a difficult task. It might not be for people like you and me but for your character it is. If you're going to write disabled characters, do it right and respectfully. |
![]() ![]() It was lovely, It was everything, it was amazing and the epilogue made me smile! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. Thank you so much for sharing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() God that was one of the best storys i read in this website. I just loved it so very much |
![]() ![]() Perfect... Just a perfect love story. They met when they were four years old. The beginning was heartbreaking. I cried out loud. I cried for Shawn and felt proud for Ryan. Ryan was Shaws protector. They were so connected together. Over all those Christmas years they were unbreakable. The story goes over sixteen years and there is not one moment that was boring. I loved them both very much. The end was ahhhhh sweet A free read so worthy to read s/3060388/1/Shawn-s-Voice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Emotional and amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i shed a few tears here and there, heh. the story was absolutely adorable, keep up the good writing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, cute cute cute. Strong characters you've got here. Nice touch with the Christmas pattern. Very enjoyable read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwh!This was just sooo adorable!i loved every bit of this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woooow!This is soooo different and utterly cute!Your writing is just gorgeous,I love the characters,the setting,the feeling here and how they develop as people and friends! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :-)!that was so so wonderfully done!I love the mix of sadness with the realism and the hope of good times here! |
![]() ![]() Awesome, that was awesome! I luv Shawn and Ryan and the way Ryan instinctively protects Shawn. Ryan's mom (and dad) was pretty terrific too. The ending was also perfect for this story and these characters. Terrific job all around! |
![]() ![]() Are you planning on writing a sequel to this at any point? Because that would be amazing *w* |