Reviews for Anatomy of a Rejection
Kiri Komori chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I just loved this story! I enjoyed these two characters' stories and how they interacted with each other made me feel as though I was there. I myself can't think of any critiques at the moment. It was a great short!
TheRomantic77 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Loved it. Simple and beautiful. A million thoughts said in a simple conversation. These two star crossed lovers seem to be in a universe of angst and cant realize whats in front of them. I am actually going to go favorite this right now!
MagicWords chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
That was astoundingly beautiful! I loved every silky word. This whole piece flowed so eloquently! I can imagine it being a short play. It was absolutely breath taking. I loved the vocabulary you used and the way you painted such vivid characters without having to take paragraphs to describe them.

My only question is, how does Liz not realize that it is her?

Ah well, a lovely, wonderful piece! Happy writing for the future!

MW