I completely loved this story. Amazing.

Oh I definitely wanted to!

I absolutely loved it! It's very hard for me to fall in love with oneshot characters but Daniel and Kelly kinda pulled at even this cold creature's heartstrings! Awesome!

Ahhhhh. Such a cute story. Great work! :D

Holy crap, it's long. /starts the quest of reading.

/reads first sentence and giggles then reads the next sentence.

Oh, good, I'm not the only one who was thinking naughty. Favorite sentence so far: [ And here I was, thinking he'd be forever alone.] LOL

No, WAIT. This: [Like, maybe, having s—"

"KELLY!" shouted Daniel, looking slightly panicked.

"—sssnacks?" I finished in a higher-than-usual voice,]

... Wait a second. Homecoming is usually at the beginning of the year. Prom is always at the end. BACKWARDS DAY.

[I grimaced and slowly, rather jerkily reached for his back pocket and carefully pulled the Twix bar out.] I am now hysterically laughing. I think this classifies as sexual assault. [It was kind of creepy, but also kind of hot at the same time—if you know what I mean.] Ifyouknowwhatimean. Stop making me laugh. I'll get hiccups. Okay, I'm going to stop quoting you, it's become too much. D:

I laughed so hard through the whole thing. So unexpected though. Like, it wasn't what I was expecting when you said you were writing a one-shot. One-shots are usually not this many scenes. o.o You should've just made this a multi-chapter story, honestly. This is embarrassing, but look at the one shot on my profile called, "Drowning." It's total emo-ness, that I wrote when I was sad, but this is pretty much what one-shots look like. Also, you should read "Tell-Tale Heart" by Poe. One-shots look more like that, are usually less than two thousand words, but nothing is limiting their length, really. It's just odd when you have, what? Over eleven thousand words?

Onto the content: Hilariiiiiooouuss. But, why Twix? Also, I don't like the very last sentence. [And that was how I got engaged.] It would've been better if you left that sentence out, and left it like that. Again, the pace was really fast, even though it was really long. Like, I think it was the way several months past during it that made it feel really fast. Again, it would've felt better to make it multi-chaptered. Oh my god, I just want to see on story from you where you have a not witty character, and they're unpopular.

Yay, thanks for the story though! Happy late birthday to me! Twenty days ago... LOL Better late than never, right? I'll definitely write you one for your birthday! When is it?

That ending was so cheesy, LOL. Actually, now that I think about it, it probably wasn't totally necessary to show their second graduation. Just to finish on: [And since he looked so dorkishly handsome that night, I kissed him.] Just a suggestion though.

Now I can't wait for your birthday. o.o

Wow, long oneshot. 11k words? Lol, nice :3

Aww, that's so cute! But what happened to Jenna and Davey? Heh, wouldn't it be funny if Jenna and Davey ended up together?

This is pretty good for a first oneshot, but it is pretty long :D