Reviews for Mr X
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
I liked this piece of mystery especially at the beginning. However, I feel as though you started rushing by midway of the story.

I would rather if the mystery story was longer, as I was just starting to try to figure out the murderer when the story abruptly veered into the end.

Don't get me wrong, the story is great! The detail and the personalities are there. It's just the pacing.

I wanted more :(