Reviews for LOVE Spells Trouble
twilightwinter chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
Ummm what's going on why would it come to an end what's the deal about whitney? Love the story though please keep writing
TamikaT chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
Okay, Lucy, you are either really slow or really lost. You had to have known that this was not going to turn out good. Yes, I know you figured that you cod get Whitneynto tell you the truth about what had happened in Jacob's room, but really if she lied once do you really think that she was going to all of a suddenly tell you the truth? This is Whitney, we are talking about, the same person that insulted you to your face at Jamaica's party to the point that you were ready to pull her toes through her eye sockets...wow, that was very deadly...lol!...so come on, it was an accident waiting to happen. Jacob probably had the blow by blow from her anyway. How else would he have known when and where to find you so quickly? But I do agree with you, he needs to stop playing games. Either he tells you what he said or just leave you alone all together. Don't drill sergeant me one minute and then almost kiss me the next!? Talk about mixed signals. Oh well the next chapter should reveal all, but I know it won't...lol!

Eternal you are a mess! Those guys are super cute for Disney characters...and remember the sleeping beauty guy was drawn a long time ago so with each new guy, the drawings got better and more advanced. I think he is cute, plus, he battled a dragon...talk about night in shining armour -wink-! Please keep writing!
Michelle1236 chapter 5 . 1/5/2013
Its only five chapters in and I'm already in love with this story! Your writing is extremely captivating! The humor is spot on! The characters are brilliantly portrayed! And I am left wanting more!
Lucy and Jacob are such a cute pairing! I also like the whole quizbowl thing. I don't think I've ever really read any story that included that so great originality!
BTW I think Jacob is going on my list of fictional story character crushes. Every leading man in the stories I read somehow always give me the tingles inside. Which leads me to your tangled comment at the beginning of this chapter! Flynn Ryder is on my crush list! If only all guys were Disney movie characters. A girl's life would almost be perfect.
Please please update soon! I need to read more!
I'll be patiently waiting for an update! :D

xoxo,
Michelle
Elizabeth Ellis chapter 4 . 12/15/2012
Amazing! Can't wait to read the rest!
Elizabeth Ellis chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
So far, I'm just LOVING it! It's funny and just the kind of books I love to read!
Great Job!
mydreamadventure chapter 4 . 12/8/2012
loved it love this story and im pretty sure i read this twice but i dont care i really enjoyed it keep it up :)
Mydreamadventure chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
My god this is so good i loved this whole chapter so much it was brillaint! the ending nooo it made me really sad!
TamikaT chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
Okay, Lucy, he is trying to convince you that he still likes you, you ninny! Why would he even bother to help you study for the quiz bowl when he "knows" he is going to win? You are the competition...no one ever helps the competition. And think about those stolen moments between you too...he so likes you. He just doesn't want to get hurt and he is trying to prove a point to you too. Kind of a 'letting you see how it feels to like someone, that is not returning your feelings' thing. Whitney was to either pass the time until you came around or she was to help him forget his feelings for you, but it didn't work.

Cool cool, I love this chapter. Please keep writing!
twilightwinter chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
KEEP WRITING! I'll die if u don't!
Nami98 chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
Wow, shes so retarded...she didnt even let him explain, UGH. UPDATE SOON! have her stop him from leavin the room, PLEASE!
alienfromx chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I like this. Sometimes it's refreshing to read something about average people.
Sailinginastor chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
keep writing !
heal me forever chapter 3 . 11/26/2012
i dnt know but SERIOUSLY i dont like him :(
i LOVE HER
mydreamadventure chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
HA! WOW! he admitted to used to liking her, crazy that seriously is irony for you. this is kind of sad that now she likes him and he knows it but he "don't" (and I use that word lightly) like her, liked this chapter good job. one question though?

how the hell do you just know randomly all of these trivia questions and the answers and all of the like clues and explanations about them, I look at them and think wtf how does anyone know the answer let alone the question to some of these haha.
TamikaT chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
WHAT?! He's does so like Lucy...no matter what he says. Those little stolen moments they keep having or not be accident and he keeps initiating them. So what is all that about? Whitney is a very smart girl. She knows that he likes Lucy too even though he is not admitting it so Whiteny should just walk away and let Lucy have Jacob. It was meant to be they are next-door-neighbor for goodness sake and they go to the same school. The opportunities are just too convenient to pass up. It Jacob knows that he will win the competition then why even bother tutoring Lucy? Why help her when he wants to bet her? Can't wait for the answers to be revealed! Please keep writing! So glad you're back!
38 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 Next »