Reviews for Goal: Reviews
Honeycloud of RiverClan chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
I think people don't review this story that much because there isn't much to say, other than praise or suggestions. Although I may be wrong.
professional griefer chapter 7 . 10/14/2012
I agree with all of those-except the prologue. Sometimes prologues can actually be really helpful and intriguing intros to stories-and you neglected to mention the ones that start at the end of a story.
Other than that, I do agree with most of the points you're making, I was just a bit annoyed by your prologue paragraph.
Keep up the good work!
Fading to Black chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
That's my name, anyway. I should get a user here.
MOVING ON, this is pretty awesome.
thegirlwhoknew chapter 5 . 10/5/2012
Thanks, I really loved your perspective on things.
Your writing style is really easy to read, well done, an enjoyable read.