Reviews for Water
SomeFuckingGirl chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Well paced. I like it. MAKE MORE.
Naver chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Great job! I like the metaphors, they complete the poem! :)
Flaming Sun of Illusions chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
I love the message. "Enjoy life while it lasts." Some people need to do that, and this poem gets the message across in a... poetic way. I know, dumb adjective since it is a poem, but I really enjoyed it, even though I normally hate poetry. Keep up the good work!
Owlwhisper chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
It's really good! Very discriptive!
AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Great job, wonderful imagery :)