Reviews for Heart of A Butterfly
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Continue the story please. Enough said _
Nita The Scene chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Your story seems pretty interesting so far and I really like the characters. But I think Kai and Zara's meetings seems a little unnatural. The first part in the hallway was fine but just after talking to him in the hallway she suddenly gets a ride home with the guy? I think their should be more of a story behind that like maybe she missed the bus or it never came or maybe it was raining and he felt sorry for her or something.
I enjoyed the story so far and hope you update soon :)
They really need more AMBW stories on this site.
PureHeartsWait chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Thank you so much for posting. I really enjoyed the first chapter.
No lies, this story was like a sign or something, because Zara totally
summed up me in more ways than one. I mean, of course she has some
things that are different about her but yeah, this just helped me a lot.
Update soon?