|Reviews for More Love Plain and Simple|
| ForgottenMemoria chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
That was beautiful. I was moved by your simple, yet colorful words."When he's in love it shines off him like a light from the heavens." That line was my favourite, it's amazingly vivid.
Also, consider separating your poems into stanzas, I think it would add to the overall "feel" of the poem. :D
Once again, congratulations!
| Bitch Du Jour chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
What a lovely poem! I think it's so bright and to the point of love. It expresses it simply but in a pretty way. Great job!