Reviews for Lest They Be Forgotten
skersey chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
This is a very strong piece, a lot of passion and gusto. I like the rhythm and sounds and rhyming. However, you do have some spelling issues. "Heart pulled taught" should be taut. and "recieving" should be receiving. Other than those two minor things, I really enjoyed reading. Keep writing :)
alisonreed00 chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
That is better. I really liked it. Thank you for telling me it was up.
alisonreed00 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I liked it. It was better at the beginning, then the ending didn't seem to match the rest.