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Wingsoflinesia chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Just a little confusing for me. First, she doesent beleive the guy, and thinks its all a commercial or something. But at the end, she's going agenst herself, and beleives him. It seems odd to me...there's no part in the story in which she says that she thinks it's real. Not trying to flame, just...point stuff out.