|Reviews for Work It Out|
| J. Sabo chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I like the general story to the poem, and I'm not the most perfect poet ever, but I don't see much of a poem in this. I see a lump of words. Like I said, I'm not the best poet ever, but I have made a few poems myself that follow a basic formula. I can give you a few pointers if you'd like.
Back to the poem, I have one of those situation... it freaking sucks! That's why I like it; I just wish I saw some rythme to it.