|Reviews for Something in the Mist|
| KayMacD chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Hunter. I LOVE that name. It's so perfect for characters searching for something.
SpiderFingers. Very cool username. Wish I'd thought of something like that.
Okay. So the actual STORY content, besides just your awesome naming ability, is very nice. It flows easily. Your descriptions are good. The pacing is good. It kind of eases you there, slowly but surely. It's nice.
Maybe a couple phrases could have been different to make it flow even better, but for the most part I give you an A, SpiderFingers.
If you feel like updating this, please do. :) It reminds me of something I'd do when I'm bored but would never finish, and it'd be a real breath of fresh air to actually see something like this through. So keep working on it. :)