|Reviews for Mystic Island Chronicles 2: Return of Dr Bunnicus|
| Wingsoflinesia chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
Ok, I'm a little confused. At what part does bunnicus die/dissapear? The huge run-on dureing that part really got me out of whack with the story. So far, so good. When are you publishing the next one?
| Wingsoflinesia chapter 4 . 9/28/2012
Take the e off nearbye. and why don't you describe the monster?
| Wingsoflinesia chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
Hey, nice save back there! A little too predictable though, don't you think? And where did Mia and Angela come from? Did they stay in the land of mystic from before? Work some on their entrance is what I would say. And bunnies don't growl as far as I know...
| Wingsoflinesia chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
WOOOOOOHOOOOOO! A DRAGON! YESYESYESYESYES!
| Wingsoflinesia chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Two things that I noticed right away: dr. Bunnicus's joke about shopping, and how devoted coroni is to mystic. I love that! Thing is though, did mystic take coroni home from the last trip? If she diden't, then where did he come from?
| littlemisslibrarian chapter 5 . 9/28/2012
That was an exciting ending! Can't wait to read the next book!
| littlemisslibrarian chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
You really like knocking Mystic out, don't you? LOL
I would like to know why the Life gem is so important. That would help readers know what the stakes are and root for the good guys more.
Also, how do you name places? I'm having trouble coming up with good names for fantasy locations, and I think the names you chose are really cool.
| FireBreathDragon chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
I KNEW that bunny was evil! :O Good job on this next part!