As always, your stories are like chocolate to a fat kid. I can't help myself! It's so beautiful the way you write this story. It's extraordinary...magnificent...probably downright sinful. I hope to death that you will continue and finish this story please oh please oh pleaseee. Much love xoxo

Please update soon. I really love this story, it's so original and great!

This was great! I love all the different demons and their world. And Azrael... does he love her? Cause that would be super sweet.

Awesome story!

Ahh! This is so super intense, that I am at a loss for words. PLEASE update soon!

This was great! Everything totally makes sense, and the demon-air thing is really cool. I can't wait for the game! The only thing I'm curious about is who they are playing against. Maybe you already said that, but I'm not sure. By the way, when it said, "Those are the Depths of Reality", I almost died. It was way perfect, and fit just right. Fantastic job. Please update soon, lest I perish in anticipation!

This was a really good chapter! I loved the way both characters were portrayed, and Pawn was really interesting. Hopefully we'll see more of her. A good update with no mistakes that I noticed. Until next time!

This story is really exciting, but slightly confusing. I still love it though. The characters are amazing and the chess theme makes for an interesting twist. Please keep writing!

I have a very small idea of what just happened. I trust, though, that you have a plan! You are right; things are happening. Please update soon, and Happy 2013!

hi so um sorry to review twice but does Felix become the other Chess Master? I mean Azrael said somthing about there always being someone on the other side

so um are the people the "whites" and the demons the "blacks" and so I know Asrael is castle...is her grandpa the other castle for the "whites"?

In case you were wondering, I have NO IDEA what is going to happen. Just so you know. Keep writing! I love this story, even though it is a bit different than what I usually read. Great job!

Omg this is sooo amazing! I love the mystery and intrigue you created and I LOVE Azrael's...thing with Luck. The world you created is so interesting!

Seriously, keep it going!

Wow this story is starting to get really, really, REALLY good! And why are there chess pieces? I'm guessing that Azrael and the Queen and all those other people are the black side, so there must be a white side...? And who's Sullivan? And what did he mean by, "A person who's already played his game?" Gaaahh so many questions _ And also a tip: be sure to edit your grammar and spelling before uploading, I found a few errors :P But anyways, have an awesome day :D

This was completely different. Just so you know, about halfway through this chapter, I finally got the whole chess naming thing. Castle, Queen, Bishop... don't laugh. I'm slow at things. Anyways, I always love a good chess reference, and this one was very interesting. I can't wait to see what will happen, becuase every time yu give us an answer, there seem to be even more questions.