|Reviews for Mr Right Now|
| dances on echoes chapter 1 . 5/11
I love how you string words together through different lines- current and concurrent, so lovely.
| AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I like the way you structured this poem. It has a nice layout. I also like the descriptions and feel you did a good job of presenting the woman in question. I got a good feel of her personality. She seems to me, in my opinion that is, to be looking for physical love, rather than "love" love. She wants the closeness of a man, but not to lose her independance by being in a long term relationship. Yet somehow she seems to feel like it's wrong and ashamed of herself at the same time - perhaps she's even a prostitute or something. Regardless, I get the feeling maybe she'll never change.
Maybe I am reading it wrong, that is just what I got from it.
Anyway, great job! I enjoyed it thouroughly.