Reviews for Never One to Back Down
Lilly-Lis chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Very well-written; you have a very captivating writing style. The details of this piece and the interaction between the characters are very well thought out. I like how you continuously show throughout that she's not one to back down and how it serves to propel the anticipation. I really wish there was more, but I guess we'll be left to our imaginations with what happens next. Thanks for the great read!
CALL-EM-AS-I-SEE-EM chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Ok you need to add more to that! At least one more chapter...please!?
7kassie8 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Please continue xxx
Smartgirl94 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Is there a continuation to this story, because it's really good. Hope to hear from you soon :D
lightXdarkness chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
I really enjoyed this one shot and am very distressed that this is i fact that, a one shot. I have read some of the review and I must disagree with them. I find that Aidan saying he will come back for her is appropriate, especially if he is 'heated up'. Plus the ending leaves a reader wondering, silently begging for a outlet for their mindfull questions. However, I see grand potential if this were a book. Especially with it starting out from the first day of her teaching with Aidan bullying. It was a fabulous short story. :)
anon chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
I thought this was extremely well-written and was disappointed when it was over. Another reviewer didn't like the end, but I thought it fit well. Good job!
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
[I will come for you.] LOL. Sorry. Juvenile appreciation for perverted innuendo.

I loved the build-up. It was gradual and elegantly paced for such a short piece. I enjoyed the characters. I feel like Sarah and Aiden clashed perfectly and even Mr. Garrett really felt like a live person with depth in the short time he appeared. I think the emotions were raw on the page and the intensity of the attraction simply sparked between the MCs.

My main problem with it was the very tail end. Aiden's final comments just seem too...cliche. Too forced. Laughable almost. "Nothing will stop me. Be ready for it." Eh. In comparison to the beginning (and basically *everything* up to that point) it didn't feel as real.

I loved the rest of it, though, don't get me wrong, and as a whole, I think you did a great job. :)

- Moonstar
TheWitch'sLover chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
This is really great and I love your writing style, its really fluid and works quite well! My only con-crit is that I think your fifth to last paragraph could be split up. Shame that this is only a one-shot, I think it would make a great two parter or maybe even longer. Happy writing ;)
Yuffie Deverell chapter 1 . 9/29/2012