|Reviews for Underground|
| Humming Witch chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Wow! I really like this idea for a story. It's something very different for me, and I love it. It seems extremely interesting.
I have only read the first chapter, but I will read the next ones soon if not today. C:
I like your writing style and with what I can see there are no grammar or spelling mistakes at all. I can't wait to read the next chapters! Just wish I had more time P:
| Kayknepps23 chapter 11 . 12/9/2012
I love Crystal and Cottontail!
| Kayknepps23 chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
| Kayknepps23 chapter 5 . 11/29/2012
This is amazing! I love Roger and Reuben's fight!
| Kayknepps 25 chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
I loved reuben's entrence it was just as if we had planned it. Awesome story
| Kayknepps23 chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
Keeps getting better! Loved Reuben's entrance, its like we planned it in speech class.
| Kayknepps23 chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
This is really good so far but wheres Reuben?